ELEPHANTS IN THE CIRCUS
As everybody knows animals are an entertainment in the circus, but its starting to get out of hand. People are starting to think animals in the circus are abused and not treated right. There are country's that have taken animals out of their circuses, such as: Standford, Connecticut; Hollywood, Florida; Boulder, Colorado; Pasadena, California. This is a current event that is taking place of stopping. It is happening because a-lot of people think that animals should be taken out of the circus. There are a-lot of magazine's that are discussing this issue such as National Geographic. The New Pickle Circus is one of the circuses that do not have animals in their circus. They have plenty of other occupying acts for the circus to do. I think this matter is interesting because its not an everyday thing, and I like Elephants. (:
By: Erin Busby (:
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I like it you used correct punctuation and spelling
I think you should have added how the animals are being abused that would have made it more interesting.-alexis R.
This is a very good story (: If i was a teacher i would give you an A! Hehe (:
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